Kia ora Jaxson. Awesome poem! I love the line letters hanging on he teaspoon. I wonder if you could make a poem from the letters in the soup? Remember to enter your poems into the poetry slam by filling in this form. Then you can visit the other poems on this site.
Chris here from SLJ. I’ve just returned from a break, great to see you still getting involved in the Summer Learning Journey! Tēnā koe for completing this Poetry Slam activity! Did you enjoy it?
This Haiku has a real surreal feeling about it. Surreal refers to surrealism, which is a type of art based on things feeling strange or different. It’s pretty cool that you managed to make a poem about soup! What made you want to write about this in particular?
The syllables are totally correct, but remember that for a Haiku the three lines need to be separate! As in above one another.
Kia ora Jaxson. Awesome poem! I love the line letters hanging on he teaspoon. I wonder if you could make a poem from the letters in the soup? Remember to enter your poems into the poetry slam by filling in this form. Then you can visit the other poems on this site.
ReplyDeleteAta mārie Jaxson!
ReplyDeleteChris here from SLJ. I’ve just returned from a break, great to see you still getting involved in the Summer Learning Journey! Tēnā koe for completing this Poetry Slam activity! Did you enjoy it?
This Haiku has a real surreal feeling about it. Surreal refers to surrealism, which is a type of art based on things feeling strange or different. It’s pretty cool that you managed to make a poem about soup! What made you want to write about this in particular?
The syllables are totally correct, but remember that for a Haiku the three lines need to be separate! As in above one another.
Can’t wait to see what you post next!
Ngā mihi,
Chris